The big A,
I think that most peoples paths in life are chosen for them, for example the book we are reading Cue For Treason.
If your parents lived on a farm, there probaly going to grow up working on that farm too.
If you had royalty in your blood you would probaly grow up to be a night or prince ect...
If your parents did not have alot of money, you might not attend school affecting what you were going to be when you grow up.
I can see that you are trying to convey the message that the life we are born to will generally remain the same until the day we die. Your examples were very clear and it backed up your statement well. However, I feel that you need to expand upon it more as it is too short. You can add reasons why the royalty in your blood makes so much difference, or why you won't attend school because you are short on money. I guess you can also connect your answer with India's caste system; for that would be an actual fact based example.
ReplyDeleteGood specific positive feedback and constructive criticism. I agree with Linda - check the rubric and remember our discussions in class regarding expectations for posting and commenting.
ReplyDeletei disagree because, for example even if you lived on a farm you could do whatever you want and maybe do something else with your life like move to a new city
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